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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opnion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

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These days, as parents have more responsibilities towards their
children
 compared to the past they need more education and information about the new ways of growing up their
kids
 too and I completely
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concur
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 with
this
 statement . In
this
 essay, I will discuss the required skills before my point is drawn at the end. As science and technology keep processing nowadays and all of us
have
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 the power and effects
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them on our
children
 it has been entirely vital to become trained about various aspects of being
a good parents
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 because today's world is more complicated and
kids
 require more support and care.
However
, it does not necessarily mean we have to become educated at schools.
For example
, If we participate in a practical workshop, we can gain adequate related skills in different aspects. In many cases, we at least need to know a little bit
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, physical, medical and mental sciences for raising our
kids
.
First
,
this
 knowledge helps us to have
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 appropriate
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 with especially our teenagers and young
children
secondly
, building
this
 knowledge
asists
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assists
assist
 us to
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 healthier
kids
 in both aspects of physical and mental.
For instance
, parents should know about the essential
notritious
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nutritious
nutrition
 which anyone
require
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 at each age stage for the body health and
also
 know about the way of decent
behavour
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behaviour
 towards them. In conclusion, having
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 and necessary knowledge of knowing how to raise
children
 is
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 vital and educational system of all countries should consider it a part of their plans and I agree with teaching youngsters the principle of how to be a great parent and suggest everyone
to
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participate these kinds of courses. If I had been more aware of the importance of
this
 lesson, I would have passed a course of it at a private institution before becoming a mother.
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