Some people believe that if a police force carries guns, this encourages higher level of violence in that society.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Police
have the main role in society for the protection and
also
services. Because of some ,reason
police
carry
guns
with them, which will cause serious issues in society. I will fully agree with the given topic and points will be discussed in the
further
paragraphs.
First
of all, without the help of the
police
force, there will be crimes undoubtfully. They are vigilant full time for the society so that giving a social service too. In the same way, most
people
wish to maintain peace in a social way, because they are not like to carry
guns
or any other types of weapons.
for example
, in Kannur Kerala
police
simply carried
guns
with them to control a party strike. But ,unfortunately, some bodies among them attacked the
police
and they are forced to kill five human beings. After that here,
police
only have the right to handle problematic personals by using bamboo sticks or by using water bullets.
Secondly
,
police
should be able to control crimes but in some ,situations one or two per cent of them are not having any type of humanity towards
people
.
However
, they misuse the Indian law and its loopholes.
Although
,
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mostly they are two types of humans some are good and most of them are bad. The bad
people
only think about their good wishes or financial benefits. They don't want to spend time with rich
people
other than the poor. If they are having
guns
with them they are killing individuals in an unfruitful way. In conclusion, the government should think about it and not give the right to handle
guns
or any other weapons to the
police
. Nobody has the right to kill
people
,
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if they are criminals.
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