Nowadays, people are spending increasingly large amounts of money on their marriage parties. Many people feel large and expensive weddings cause problems for the bride and groom. Do you agree? Use personal examples in your response

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The act of celebrating the marital union between two
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individuals has existed for ages but recently people spend a huge amount of money on
marriage
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ceremony
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and
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has made some people opine that elaborate wedding parties can have a detrimental effect on couples. I agree with
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opinion and more explanation on why I support the idea will be discussed in
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with, extravagant spending on wedding parties make some
couple
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go bankrupt after the
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because the majority of them go into debt when organising big parties. Bankruptcy at the beginning of a
marriage
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is not good for both the bride and groom, the reason for
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is that they will spend their early days or weeks trying to pay the debt
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of being together and understanding each other's personalities as well as likes and dislikes.
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, a friend of mine who got married two months ago had to resume work the
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week after her wedding ,
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of going on honey-moon with her husband, (a period which is necessary to create a strong bond of affection between them) because they collected loans to make their wedding
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the talk of the town.
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is a disadvantage to the new
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.
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, a wedding
ceremony
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is only for a day while life after
marriage
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spans many years till death,
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,spending a significant amount of money which can be invested into other reasonable ventures capable of yielding significant benefits to the
couple
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in the future could cause problems.
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, organizing an expensive wedding
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and having no home to live in is a problem which can eventually lead to divorce because the
couple
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will have to live with a family relation or friend who might not be hospitable, or they may be faced with
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party interference in their
marriage
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and
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is a major challenge they might encounter, it has the ability to ruin the
marriage
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. In conclusion, an expensive wedding
ceremony
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is becoming a trend among young people today,
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it is very attractive, it can cause problems for the couples because the majority will go into debt and spend their early married days trying to pay up while some will have no money to rent an apartment making them live with family relations or friends ,
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can be challenging and become a threat to the young
marriage
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.

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