Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised that someone will help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barett. In your letter suggest how you could help her in her home say why you would like to do this work explain when you will and will not be available.
Dear Mrs Barrett,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I can be the best person for this
role as I have recently graduated from the Hotel management course as I have learned so much from this
course regarding the kitchen work and organization of things, which can be real useful if I get hired for this
role.
When it comes to availability, I am available for the following summer as I want to do a masters in this
field for now, there are seats not available, and I have to wait for admission so meanwhile, I can test the skills that I have learned from the previous course and I can you help you out with house chores, as it is a win-win situation for us.
I am available full-time from Monday to Friday because I have joined a club for volunteer work, so I might be busy on the weekends, but for the rest of the week, I am happy to assist you at your convenience. I am going to attach my resume to this
e-mail so you can go through it. Please let me know as soon as possible so that I can look for other opportunities.
Yours faithfully,
karmjeet kaur
Change the capitalization
Kaur
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single idea per paragraph
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suitable writing tone
Maintain a suitable writing tone by ensuring that it remains formal throughout the letter.
complete response
The letter addresses all parts of the task clearly and concisely.
greeting and closing
A courteous greeting and closing have been used appropriately.
logical structure
The logical structure of the letter is strong, with a clear purpose in each section.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite