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The maintenance of public libraries is a waste of money because of compute technology that has similar functions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#maintenance #libraries #waste #money #technology #functions
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These days, modern
technology
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 play the important role in receiving knowledge and information similar to central libraries.
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, some
people
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 feel that the
library
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 is not necessary anymore, and the authority should not invest a budget to renovate it, while others argue that it is still indispensable of its advantages, which cannot be replaced by computers. In
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 essay, the reason support why libraries should still exist will be elaborated on.
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 of all, the
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 is not only the
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 where
people
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 are able to read
books
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 and search for information, but it's
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 the
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 where
people
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 who love reading gather.
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, the reader can make new friends who have similar passions.
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, when I was a master's degree student, I always went to the
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 and I found the girl that I fall in love with.
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, right now she is my soulmate. The
library
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 is more than a book store, it is a
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 where you can meet new
people
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 who love the same things.
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,
Library
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 enables
people
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 to search for rare information or old
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, which cannot be found on the internet or any modern
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 as it has been the
place
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 to preserve the various types of
books
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 for many decades. To illustrate, the historical story of King Rama the
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 of Thailand cannot be read on the internet because nobody uploads it and it is valuable to the nation, which cannot be published widely.
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 is why the government need to spend the budget to conserve the national treasure. In conclusion,
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 the advancement of
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 can offer a new way of reading, it cannot subsidize the advantages of the
library
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 including gathering places, and sources of ancient
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. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with the statement and believe that the
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 will exist no matter the development of
technology
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.
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