Some people say when you move to a new country, you have to learn the language and culture of that country. Others say it is better to stick to your old traditions. Discuss both opinions and state yours.

According to some
people
,
a
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moving to a new area connects with
the
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apply

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learning the
language
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and

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und
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and

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culture of a new country. Others incline to the opinion that the important thing
to
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is to

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save
you
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your

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own
language
and traditions.
This
essay discusses both ideas from psychological and economical perspectives.
First
of all, a
migraion
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migration

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to
the
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another country and the learning of a new
language
can cause a number of negative emotions,
such
as
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feeling

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feelling
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feeling

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unsafe,
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losing

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loosing
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losing

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their own identity and old friends. In order to avoid these outcomes, some
people
choose to keep their native
language
and traditions. It helps them to stay in a comfort zone, at the same time they feel confident and stay psychologically
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healthy

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heatlhy
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healthy

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For example
, I know some
people
, who moved from Russia to Germany without knowing
German
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the German

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language
and felt depressed. Staying connected to their
ralatives
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relatives

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and friends helped them to feel relaxed.
On the other hand
, some
people
consider that learning a new
language
and culture
provide
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provides

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some economical benefits.
People
, who have learned a new
language
, have better job opportunities and higher incomes
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compared

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comprared
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compared

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to
people
, who
does
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do

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not know
the
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apply

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foreign languages.
For instance
, after moving to Germany my friend has learnt the
language
and found a well-paid job in a short time. The applications of the candidates without knowing
German
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the German

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language
were declined. In conclusion, I support the opinion,
when
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that

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the
language
is an important part of moving to a new place. It can help not only to integrate
to
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into

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a new society but
also
to start a perfect career.
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