After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter. In your letter:- - Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing to him/her - Express your gratitude - Offer him/her to visit your home with his/her family.

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Anderson, I would like to thank you for saving my life from a horrible car accident. Being a stranger, you have really done a commendable job. I am Jacob, a resident of William Street Colony, Brisbane. Basically, I got your address from City Hospital where I was admitted.
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I got discharged yesterday and my doctors told me about
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appropriate reflex action on the accident spot
as CPR and
, I not only want to appreciate your best efforts but I
like the gesture you have shown
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a stranger. Certainly,
shows how much respect you have for humanity.
, as a token of respect, I would like to invite you for a family dinner at my home. My family and I are eagerly waiting to meet you and thank you in person for doing
phenomenal work. Please let us know the time and date when you will be available to visit our home for dinner. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards, Jacob Brown.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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