Do you feel it is better for young people leaving school to study further at University or go straight into the workplace? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples for your knowledge and experience.

There has been a controversy about if staying at

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is necessary for the young generation nowadays. I think people should try to study at

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instead

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of going straight into the workplace. My reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs.

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, studying at

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can propel the development of society.

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, some special knowledge

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only taught at

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as some medical knowledge.

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can become elites, like doctors or lawyers, by using that professional information. The main role of

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is to cultivate talents for the country;

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, if the number of

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students

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is high,

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the country is bound to develop well because of rich human resources.

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, if the young generation just goes straight to the workplace rather than study at

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a phenomenon can hinder the country's development due to a lack of talents.

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, studying at

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is intertwined with the harmony of society. As we know,

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pay considerable attention to

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' personalities and comprehensive abilities;

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, it's commonplace that people with a

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degree tend to be more civilized than those without it. As a consequence, if the number of

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students

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was increasing,

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our society could be more peaceful.

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, going straight into the workplace has some advantages as well.

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, you can gain more work experience. It's quite common that those who are good at studying are bad at doing practical work

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because they don't have any working experience;

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, they might have a pair of clumsy hands. At

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point, people who have working experience seem "smarter" on account of the knowledge they learned from previous works. In conclusion, they both have advantages but I would still recommend studying

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first

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instead

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of working immediately.