You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter: • Explain why you're interested in the tour. • Ask for information about dates and prices. • Express your concerns about your fitness level.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to inquire about
this
upcoming week-long Konkan Mountain Range Trek in your company Brochure.
First
of all, can you please share the Package details along with the dates,
also
is
this
a one-time trek or does it happen on different dates as well so that I will accommodate my leaves.
Additionally
, can you please share the list of items to carry during the tour
.
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I had never been Trekking and it's one of my interests to complete
this
year and I am exhilarated about
this
.
However
, I have
this
condition of being overweight and losing breath sometime during uphill climbing, so please share if any facilities are present along the tour.
Also
, as the trekking dates are a month away, please advise some exercise so that I will work out a few. I will look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Gurveer Singh
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