Pollution of air, water and soil has become critical in last years and it takes millions of years to recoup. What are the main causes of pollution? How can we tackle this problem individually and globally?

Natural resources are a gift to the world and do not repeat again
also
, do not bend or renew.
Therefore
we should use them very carefully as well as logically to remain in the best situation for the
next
generation. In
this
essay, I will mention some reasons which lead to
this
problem
also
, what actions can do to provide better conditions for them and
then
conclude. Simultaneously with the increasing population in the world human beings need more goods
such
as clothes, food, accommodation and so on. for supplying these needs they should destroy soil, water and air.
For example
, farmers should have more crops, have to use more chemical substances
such
materials that contaminate the soil ,
then
rain picks up all bad material to the lake and sea,
therefore
all food chains become destroyed. Another example is construction,
need
Correct article usage
the need
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for more houses leads to destroyed jungle or deforestation. Definitely, some action can prevent them from more destroying. The government and ordinary people can try to be aware of their environment
also
, find practical ways to deal with these destroyed.an exemplify, citizens can use paper packets shopping
instead
of disposable plastic purchases. Or using public transportation
instead
of deriving own car and using foul energy for them which has a bad effect on air quality. These actions can remain natural resources in better condition for the
next
generation. In conclusion, as far as I know, the main reason for
such
problems is the lack of awareness of the people. The government with citizens and generally all the people in the world should help and set regular laws as well as try to do that laws exact until can transmit these resources to the
next
generation with less damage.
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