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such
as Korea, China, Japan and so on are faced with deformities especially in the face, making their citizens correct these abnormalities via plastic surgeries or Linking Words
face lift
. Correct your spelling
facelift
Hence
, people should be allowed to get their aesthetic needs.
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,
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as a result
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, in 2019, a Nigerian actress by name Jennifer Badmus revealed that she suffered severe heart disease caused by excess fat in the body and the only remedy was liposuction. Linking Words
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well-being
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promotes
longetivity
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longevity
connectivity
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operations
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practised
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self-confidence
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