Multiple antithetical opinions exist on the issue of body enhancement. Some opponents insist that cosmetic surgeries should be banned.
, I consider those who go for image modifications,
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it for their self-esteem as well as correct other underlying medical complications.
The choice most individuals make towards their health has been influenced by the profound trust
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technical developments.
, people carry out
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as a means to establish self-confidence. People who are not physically endowed may suffer
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some part of the world,
as Korea, China, Japan and so on are faced with deformities especially in the face, making their citizens correct these abnormalities via plastic surgeries or
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.
, people should be allowed to get their aesthetic needs.
More so, the health of humans should be put into consideration.
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the rate of deadly diseases
of obesity has significantly increased over the years.
, in 2019, a Nigerian actress by name Jennifer Badmus revealed that she suffered severe heart disease caused by excess fat in the body and the only remedy was liposuction.
, the good general
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of an individual
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erudite
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that an embargo should be ordained to eradicate reconstructive
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by the populace.
, I do not agree with
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cosmetic surgeries proofer
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and solution
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those with health complications.