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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood, or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is often discussed that
volunteer
community
 service should be mandatory in high school curriculums. I agree that
volunteer
 work starting at a young age helps
students
 develop a strong character and a helpful personality. Allotting time during the
students
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 day to
volunteer
 in the
community
 teaches
the
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the
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importance of positive development of their society.
For example
, the student could participate in planting trees in the
neighborhood
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.
This
 initiative would teach the student the importance of "going green" as well as beautifying the area. The more trees, the less CO2.
This
 small effort gives rise to potential health benefits
of
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 the
community
 and may contribute to an increase in the lifespan of its" people.
In addition
, volunteering can assist
students
 in creating strong ties to their
community
. As they interact with many different kinds of people they develop improved interpersonal skills, resulting in improved communication.
Students
 who participate in mandatory
volunteer
 work may discover hidden talents that will help them achieve
life long
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 goals and careers. Many people struggle with their purpose in life even late into their adult years. They spend many years trying to "find themselves." Working for a charity may result in a job or career they would not have discovered had they not participated in
community
 service.
In addition
, developing a sense of compassion for others particularly the elderly or disabled will promote a healthy sense of
self worth
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. In
conclusion
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 I believe that
students
 that participate in a mandatory program of
volunteer
community
 service
in
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 their high school years will only help to improve their character, sense of
community
 and
self worth
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 and help them develop into strong healthy members of society.
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