Some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news. However, others believe that they can get news better through another media. Discuss bot views and give your opinion?

It is true that some
people
believe that the best way to get
news
is from
newspapers
while the opponents believe that they can get
news
better through
another
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media
. I believe that
another
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other
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media
usage is the best way. Is using alternative
media
the best to get
news
?
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both views.
Firstly
,
newspaper
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the newspaper
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is the most trusted and reliable printed
media
in the world because the publishers are
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responsible
reponsible
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responsible
on
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for
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the articles posted.
As a result
, no false data, information or articles can be published. To exemplify, the information gathered by the journalists
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runs
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through editors and top
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management
managment
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management
before posting because once
a wrong information
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is published it will tarnish the
publishers
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publisher's
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reputation and
also
it is the responsibility of
media
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the media
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to provide truthful
news
.
Newspapers
also
include both local and international
news
as well as
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entertainment section.
However
,
people
are
drifted
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away from reading
newspapers
because the
news
published will be outdated.
For instance
, an incident
happened
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that happened
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yesterday will be published in
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today's
todays
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newspaper.
Moreover
, there will be one or no
photo
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photos
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which will make them less
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interesting
intresing
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interesting
to read.
On the other hand
,
people
can get
news
from other
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media
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medias
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media
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such
as television or
internet
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the internet
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. Most
people
preffer
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prefer
thse
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these
those
methods because they can get live updates about
a
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incident.
For example
, during protests or
riots
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viewers can get live updates and so will get a better idea about the incident.
Thus
it is entertaining to watch
news
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the news
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and it is completely free.
Additionally
, anyone can watch or listen to
news
anywhere
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the work and no literacy is required.
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Nevertheless
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there are certain negativities of getting
news
from these platforms
such
as the viewers will get
distrupted
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disrupted
from
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advertisements
advertisments
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advertisements
and most of the
news
published
in
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social
media
platforms are not reliable. In conclusion, both
newspapers
and other
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media
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medias
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media
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have their own benefits and drawback. But
i
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believe that viewers can get
news
better through television and online despite its drawbacks.
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