As Technology is advancing, some people think that soon there would be no role of teachers. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, as science and automation keep processing and we have experienced the convenience and power of the modern things and we have become more eager to omit our old traditions and types of equipment as well as some vocations like
teachers
. I broadly agree with
this
statement but in
this
essay, I will discuss various ideas before my point is drawn at the end.
To begin
with, I claim that curriculum would be meaningless without the presence of
teachers
because human beings have more abilities to connect the students and
as a result
, the conclusion would surely become better,
teachers
are able to teach and guide better and prevent misunderstanding of students.
For example
,
teachers
check the assignment and will give beneficial feedback with details to pupils so we never can omit
teachers
.
On the other hand
, artificial intelligence is much more intelligent for teaching and never become exhausted and nervous to repeat the materials of the lessons.
However
, they might crash at a special time and they completely depend on the latest machinery and
also
the electricity.
For instance
, during the latest pandemic if technology had not existed all students all over the world would have to postpone their education since
teachers
were not able to teach in person
therefore
I think using technology is essential but irreplaceable to
teachers
. In conclusion, using recent developments in schools and universities is vital and undeniable
although
the effects of the presence of
teachers
are really crucial particularly in rural and poor areas and for someone who cannot afford the expenses of using modern learning methods. I believe it entirely depends on the region and financial situation of families and
also
each student demand for the method of acquiring knowledge and I suggest putting both ways reachable for everyone.
Submitted by saeedforoghi538 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: