You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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I want to book for next month regarding my studies as am going to do a graduate diploma in Business management

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is a term-based course which will be done in 15 days it will be starting from 15th April to 30th April. if my leave is approved it will help to gain extra skills to improve my day-to-day activities in the industry as well and I will learn new tactics to handle more task pressure with new approaches and a new mindset. Meanwhile, the pending assignments left from those past 15 days I will complete in after working hours in order to reach companies productivity .

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course is regarding my current job it will give growth to my ideas as well. I will be very grateful to you if you grant my vaccination. Yours Sincerely, Shivani

shivanusharma09748Sat Mar 29 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Ensure clear paragraphing to separate different ideas.

task achievement

Polish your closing statement; it should be more relevant to requesting time off, not vaccination.

task achievement

The letter clearly states the purpose of the leave request.

task achievement

You have included benefits of the course on your performance.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

151 words

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