In many countries, too much money was spent by government and individuals on national celebration such as New Year and religious festivals. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In many nations, administration and population consume a high expenditure on celebrating holidays and

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, whether doing

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can lead to benefits becomes a heated debate. For my part,

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there might be arguments supporting that it is wasteful to spend

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on celebrating these

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, I tend to believe that

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action can be more beneficial for us. On the one hand, I think the government and

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should spend the amount of

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on celebrating.

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have a vital connection with the cultural identity of the

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who celebrate them. In

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sense, if one festival in a country disappears due to the lack of attention, the distinctive ways of lifestyles that are associated with it will

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go extinct. As

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, we will lose the rich cultural diversity in

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country.

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, government spend

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to hold some events and inhabitant's costs on celebrating

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are ways which can raise

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’s awareness of cultural identity and cultural recognition. Meanwhile, not only do

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feel a sense of happiness

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multiculturalism in

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society can be protected and promoted.

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, it can be argued that celebrating these is a waste of

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. The supporters of

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view argue that with the development of technology,

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can celebrate

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in front of the screen on the internet.

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, the government can save

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money

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and the

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can be used for the construction of the infrastructures, meanwhile,

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can buy more useful things rather than celebrate.

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, I think it will create a sad world, in which fewer and fewer

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will take part in the celebration in the future. As a consequence, the

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generation may forget the

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and hard to find their own identity. To conclude, celebrating

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is a meaningful as well as important behaviour.

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there are some downsides in the short term, there are actually more merits in the long term, which can lead to multiculturalism and prosperity of the society.