Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

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of increasing

vehicles

on road and environmental impurity is

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a rise

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in the fare of fossil fuels. I, myself totally disagree with

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upcoming

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will discuss the main reasons with

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to begin

with, in

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modern era people prefer to use cars, bikes, buses and other

vehicles

to make

thier

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their

work easy and

efficent

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efficient

, but

this

create

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some environmental problems and traffic jams, but

higher

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price rate of petrol is not a solid

solution

.

firstly

, in

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modernity using

vehicles

became an easy way for

indivisuals

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individuals

, for

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no one will give a

second

thought about the price of petrol

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because

it not going to impact their weekly or monthly wages.

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earn

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nearly $1000 per week and

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diesel

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or petrol increased by $10, still does not have any effect.

secondly

,

vehicles

are not the main reason for contamination,there are many other things which

also

affect

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such

as, factories,deforestation, dumping garbage in

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or on the edge of roads and many more.

hence

, changes in

payment

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the payment

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of fossil fuels is not a perfect way.

furtehmore

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furthermore

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the

problem

of

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adequate

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should be taken by

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for instance

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government

governments

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should encourage inhabitants to plant

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trees and

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can be started through the schools as

pupil

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pupils

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learn

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from their teachers and if they convey them to do

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it will quite beneficial. apart from

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,it is

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our duty to look after our planet because we survive here and should not play with natural things.

last

but not least, we should save our flora and fauna because these

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also

exist

at

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on

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this

earth and the reason

of

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extinction is either the cutting of trees and using mobile phones and

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handheld gadgets.

hence

, nothing is impossible as

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"possible" is hidden in "

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", so we should think differently to save our earth. to sum

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with,it is clear that a single step cannot do anything,to vanish the main

problem

some perfect and relevant way should

followed

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by the regime. if there is any

problem

, but

solution

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is

also

available. and not only

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government

governement

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we should

also

do something

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this

issue.