Environmental problems are too big for individual countries and individual persons to address. In other words, we have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Climate change is a phenomenon affecting all
people
in all walks of life, from individual citizens
to whole countries and huge multinational companies. Therefore
, I disagree with the notion that the only way to address the environmental problems is at international
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the international
level
. I firmly believe that this
colossal problem can only be handled if all individuals contribute; all governments take steps
at national
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the national
a national
level
and also
join hands at an international level
.
Undoubtedly, gigantic steps
need to be taken,
and are being taken at the international Remove the comma
apply
level
. The 'COP21' in Paris in November 2015 is a step in this
direction. The aim of 'COP21' is well known: to reach a universal agreement limiting the rise in global average temperature to 2°C above pre-industrial levels. All nations are realizing that climate change is one of the greatest challenges faced by mankind today.
Many steps
can be taken at the national level
. Governments can aware people
of the benefits of using Add a hyphen
energy-efficient
energy efficient
devices. Add a hyphen
energy-efficient
For instance
, this
year government of India gave 2 LED bulbs
to each government employee at Rs 10/- each under the "Prakash Path" scheme. The cost of each bulb is Rs 400/-. The cost will be recovered by adding a very small amount in
each month's electricity bill for about a year. In about 100 cities, the streetlights have been replaced with LED Change preposition
to
bulbs
, which is a saving of
a huge amount per day. LED Change preposition
apply
bulbs
use a tenth of electricity as compared to other bulbs
. Once people
realize that by using LED bulbs
, their electricity bills will reduce, they will be prepared to make the initial heavy investment also
.
Although
the international and national level
steps
are imperative, it is also
a fact that individual action combined with governmental action can do a lot more to prevent climate change than if individual citizens
were not involved. In a world of six billion people
, if everyone stopped wasting water, disposed
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off
their rubbish properly, Change preposition
of
started
accepting recycled Correct word choice
and started
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material
materia
! and stopped succumbing to consumerism, Correct your spelling
materials
then
it would go a long way in solving the problem of environment
.
Summing up, individual Correct article usage
the environment
citizens
cannot sit back and say it is someone else's responsibility to protect the environment; we must all play our part - individual citizens
and governments at the national and international level
.Fix the agreement mistake
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