You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems. Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area. In that letter • explaining the problems • suggesting ways to help the situation • proposing a possible meeting You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Neighbour

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Dear Neighbour, I hope all of you are healthy and safe. I am writing
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letter to arouse your attention to the parking areas in our community. As some of you may notice, there is an increasing number of cars
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to park nearby the parking lot, so there is
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enough space to accommodate all residents' cars. I have received a number of complaints, requiring me to take action and fix the problem. To solve the problem, there are a couple of options
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on the table and I would like to discuss with you
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, some suggest we should simply expand the parking areas to
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playground. Others say we should stop giving away parking permission to residents from other communities. Since many of you have divisive opinions, I would like to take the chance and invite all of you to come over and join the discussion. The meeting will take place on the
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floor of Micheal's office building on Thursday. You may want to take your resident card along with you as we will verify your identity before you enter the conference room.  We are looking forward to talking to you face to face.  Kindly regards  Clarence Peng
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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