You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 word

Nowadays, we are living in a hectic schedule full of aggressiveness. Just of it, people do bullying out of the house in daily life. Bullying
also
affects the student and now it is a big problem in many
schools
. In the
further
essay, I will discuss its causes and solutions. To commence with, most of the students live alone at home just because of the busy schedule of parents and Due to loneliness learn to get more aggressive because they do not share their feelings with anyone and they enjoy living alone.
That is
the main reason
when
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why
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they survive in society they can do bullying with others.
Moreover
, now the less punishment in
schools
due to
this
students are careless and they do not feel fear of teachers and they do anything that they want.
Hence
, they do not follow the
rules
and
regulations
of
schools
just because of less punishment in
schools
.
For example
, private school's burds do more bullying
as
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compared to government
schools
.
On the other hand
, The managements of the
schools
have to make strict
rules
and
regulations
and if someone can break those
rules
they have to punish them
and
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apply
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if they repeat those mistakes again and again and the management of the school has to suspend that student or inform the parents. due to
this
, they can control the bullying in the
schools
.
For instance
, In army
schools
, they give hard punishment if someone do bullying or doing other mistakes.
that is
the reason army school learners strictly follow the
rules
and
regulations
. To conclude, They have to
putt
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put
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strict steps to control the bullying and apply the
rules
and
regulations
on
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students and if anyone can not follow them
then
they
has
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to
putt
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put
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strict step against them to control others.
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