You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 word
Nowadays, we are living in a hectic schedule full of aggressiveness. Just of it, people do bullying out of the house in daily life. Bullying
also
affects the student and now it is a big problem in many schools
. In the further
essay, I will discuss its causes and solutions.
To commence with, most of the students live alone at home just because of the busy schedule of parents and Due to loneliness learn to get more aggressive because they do not share their feelings with anyone and they enjoy living alone. That is
the main reason when
they survive in society they can do bullying with others. Correct word choice
why
Moreover
, now the less punishment in schools
due to this
students are careless and they do not feel fear of teachers and they do anything that they want. Hence
, they do not follow the rules
and regulations
of schools
just because of less punishment in schools
. For example
, private school's burds do more bullying as
compared to government Correct word choice
apply
schools
.
On the other hand
, The managements of the schools
have to make strict rules
and regulations
and if someone can break those rules
they have to punish them and
if they repeat those mistakes again and again and the management of the school has to suspend that student or inform the parents. due to Correct word choice
apply
this
, they can control the bullying in the schools
. For instance
, In army schools
, they give hard punishment if someone do bullying or doing other mistakes. that is
the reason army school learners strictly follow the rules
and regulations
.
To conclude, They have to putt
strict steps to control the bullying and apply the Correct your spelling
put
rules
and regulations
on
students and if anyone can not follow them Change preposition
to
then
they has
to Change the verb form
have
putt
strict step against them to control others.Correct your spelling
put
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