These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. what could be the reason for this? Is it a positive or negative development?
Nowadays it is so difficult to take care of a child. Mother and father both have the same responsibility for their children today's parents are capable of doing outside jobs but it depends on them who is better at doing work.I think it’s made a positive impact. The reason will be given in the next paragraphs.
First of all, If I talk about fathers, they have more of a burden on their families. He earns money for them and fulfils their dreams and it is so difficult to do because nowadays in my country there is a large population so it is so hard to get a good income source.
In addition
, they do not have proper knowledge about how to care for children so men believe that it’s better to do so for women. Linking Words
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, fathers have eight hours of work and when they come home they are tired.
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, mothers have a lot of housework like cleaning and cooking. In Linking Words
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, They are fully secure in society so they can go out for earnings. If women have great opportunities, it is the right thing to do. Linking Words
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, she has more degrees and positions in ratan tata like more.
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To sum up
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