In many countries, traditions and customs are disappearing. What are the reasons? What should school and parents do to keeping our traditions alive?

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many countries are

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about

traditions

and

customs

are vanishing. We should find the reasons

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that and

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school

and

parents

should find ways to

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our

traditions

alive. On the one hand, there are many reasons about

traditions

are disappearing. I believe the majority of that

reasons

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is children are influenced by western cultures.

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western people do not

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care about

traditions

and

customs

too much.

Moreover

, it is undeniable that another main reason is the development of modern technology. Today's teenagers spend most of

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their

thier

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their

time using the internet and electronic devices.

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, there are many teenagers not interested in

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or

customs

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own

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country.

On the other hand

,

school

and

parents

have

responsible

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to

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keeping

traditions

alive, because

school

and

parents

are adult generations. To illustrate,

school

is able to

preserving

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traditions

and

customs

by

organize

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activities about history.

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, my

school

always organize activities about

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kran festival for preserving

this

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customs

.

Parents

should be

also

responsible

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problem by teaching history or telling stories

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their children. To conclude, in my opinion, it is not surprising if children are not interested in

traditions

and

customs

, because in currently generations

traditions

and

customs

are not important anymore.