some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country wehere they did their training. others believe they sould be free to work in another country if they wish. discuss both views and give your own opinion

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as doctors and engineers require years of training before they reach enough experience to run their offices independently, surgeons require sometimes a decade of

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training and education before being able to perform complex operations solely. Engineers

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need years of office and field training in order to handle and run complicated urban projects. Some people believe that

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should continue to work only in

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where they had their practice, I completely disagree with

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will discuss both views and present my own perspective. Practice makes perfect, according to that,

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trained in

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system usually are well adapted to

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environment,

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they are more efficient in these circumstances so leaving to another country would bring lower achievements for them.

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, doctors

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years of training treating patients from their community, so it is logical that they should give back to the community that helped them complete their training.

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lack competent

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in the healthcare system.

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from other

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should aid these

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, surgeons should work for a period of time in developing

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where they help train other doctors and share their knowledge and experience with them. If all

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do the same and all share their

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with less fortunate ones,

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can lead to more prosperous societies around the

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and help change the

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into a better place. In conclusion, I believe that

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should invest back in

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country that helped and trained them, they should be able to work in other less fortunate

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in order to offer help and spread the knowledge and share

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and create a better

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ultimately.