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some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country wehere they did their training. others believe they sould be free to work in another country if they wish. discuss both views and give your own opinion

#people #professionals #doctors #engineers #work #country #wehere #sould
Professionals
such
 as doctors and engineers require years of training before they reach enough experience to run their offices independently, surgeons require sometimes a decade of
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stressful
stressfull
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stressful
 training and education before being able to perform complex operations solely. Engineers
also
 need years of office and field training in order to handle and run complicated urban projects. Some people believe that
professionals
 should continue to work only in
countries
 where they had their practice, I completely disagree with
this
 approach.
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 will discuss both views and present my own perspective. Practice makes perfect, according to that,
professionals
 trained in
certain
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 system usually are well adapted to
this
 environment,
thus
 they are more efficient in these circumstances so leaving to another country would bring lower achievements for them.
Also
, doctors
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receive
received
recieve
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receive
 years of training treating patients from their community, so it is logical that they should give back to the community that helped them complete their training.
On the other hand
, numerous
countries
 around the
world
 lack competent
professionals
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 in the healthcare system.
As a result
 of that,
professionals
 from other
countries
 should aid these
unpriviledged
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unprivileged
countries
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, surgeons should work for a period of time in developing
countries
 where they help train other doctors and share their knowledge and experience with them. If all
countries
 do the same and all share their
professionals
 with less fortunate ones,
this
 can lead to more prosperous societies around the
world
 and help change the
world
 into a better place. In conclusion, I believe that
although
professionals
 should invest back in
their
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 country that helped and trained them, they should be able to work in other less fortunate
countries
 in order to offer help and spread the knowledge and share
experience
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experiences
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 and create a better
world
 ultimately.
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