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Transport preferences among young people From different countries

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 depicts the percentile preferences of the means of
transportation
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 among young
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 in Great
Britain
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USA
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, Germany and
France
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. Overall, it can be seen that the percentage of young
people
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 who uses
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car
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the car
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 as a preferred means of movement was high in
France
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, most young
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 in
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 preferred
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car
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 as a means of
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however
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France
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 had the highest percentile of young
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 who used
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car
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 as a means of movement in
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USA
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the USA
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 and Great
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 the percentile was equal. Other means of
transportation
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 in the aforementioned countries Bicycle was high in Great
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 followed by
France
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 while
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USA
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 had the lowest
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 bicycle was the most preferred means of
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 in Germany while
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 was the
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 preferred means of
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