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IN SOME COUNTRIES, MORE AND MORE PEOPLE ARE BECOMING INTERESTEDIN FINDING OUT ABOUT THE HISTORY OF THE HOUSE OR BUILDING THEY LIVE IN. WHAT ARE THE REASONS FOR THIS ? HOW CAN PEOPLE RESEARCH THIS ?

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THERE IS AN INCREASING TREND IN KNOWING ABOUT THE PAST OF THE HOME OR BUILDING THE PEOPLE LIVE IN ACROSS THE GLOBE.
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 IS BECAUSE OF THE INFLUENCE OF THE SOCIAL MEDIA PLATFORMS LIKE FACEBOOK AND INSTAGRAM.THE PUBLIC CAN ACCESS
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 INFORMATION BY REFERRING TO THE HISTORY BOOKS OR ONLINE RESOURCES FROM TRUSTED WEBSITES. THE SOCIAL MEDIA IS CREATING A LOT OF TRENDS THESE DAYS, THAT TOO OVER A SHORT PERIOD OF TIME.
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 PARTICULAR TREND CAUGHT A LOT OF ATTENTION WHEN A MUSIC CELEBRITY POSTED A VIDEO ON HIS INSTAGRAM ACCOUNT ABOUT HIS HOME AND ITS HISTORICAL SIGNIFICANCE ALONG WITH AN INTRODUCTORY SONG FOR HIS NEW ALBUM.IN THE SAME POST HE URGED HIS FANS TO TAKE UP
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 CHALLENGE AND SHARE THEIRS WITH HIS MUSIC IN THE BACKGROUND.THAT FIRED UP LIKE ANYTHING. LATER MANY OTHER CELEBRITIES AND BUSINESSMEN BOASTED ABOUT THEIR EXORBITANT LIFE IN THOSE MONUMENTAL PROPERTIES.IT SLOWLY CREPT INTO THE SOCIETY THROUGH DIFFERENT FORMS. IT MADE THE PRICE TAGS OF THESE ASSETS MAGNANIMOUS. THE PEOPLE CAN RESEARCH ABOUT THESE FACTS FROM STANDARD REGIONAL HISTORY TEXTBOOKS OR GENUINE WEB PORTALS.IT IS VERY IMPORTANT TO VERIFY
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 INFORMATION, AS THERE IS A CHANCE TO GET CHEATED OR ENDING UP PAYING AN UNNECESSARY AMOUNT FOR THESE STRUCTURES IN THE REAL ESTATE BUSINESS.A RECENT STUDY HAS CONCLUDED THAT MORE THAN 70 PER CENT OF THE REAL ESTATE ADVERTISEMENTS PROVIDE FAKE INFORMATION TO BOOST THE MARKET PRICE. THE INCREASING INTEREST TO STUDY ABOUT THE HISTORY OF HOMES AND BUILDINGS ARE THE EFFECT OF A RECENT SOCIAL MEDIA TREND . THE PUBLIC CAN LOOK INTO MANY WRITTEN REFERENCES AND THE WEB FOR IN-DEPTH KNOWLEDGE AND FACT VERIFICATION.
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