Some people think that foreign visitors should be charged more than locals when they visit cultural and tourist attractions in a country. To what extent do you agree with this view.

It is often argued that overseas tourists should be charged more to visit historical buildings than the indigenous communities. I completely disagree with
this
view because everyone has an equal right to see
this
and they have come from a far place and already spent a heavy
amount
in travelling.
To begin
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sites are not personal properties so everyone has equal rights to them. These are the assets of mankind. No single government or nation can categorically say they have a complete right to it. If the local people pay less as an entry
price
,
this
is a completely unfair practice due to the fact that travellers from all over the world have the same rights as them. To illustrate, the 36 storied- building, Cocoa house was constructed on the profit generated by Nigerian farmers and it has been a major tourist attraction since about 6 decades ago. ,
However
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ticket
price
is the same for both the locals and foreigners.
Hence
, due to human ,
rights
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there should be the same entry
price
for these.
Furthermore
, travellers come from different countries and spend an enormous
amount
to reach these places. They pay a huge
amount
to take flights and cabs.
Moreover
, they spend a substantial
amount
on accommodation too. If again a more
price
is asked for entry to these places,
this
is not justified. The role of the government is to incentivise tourists to travel again but not to demotivate them. A double or more
price
than local residents is a source of discouragement.
For instance
, recent research reveals that international visitors do not prefer those places which charge double-entry prices from foreigners.
Therefore
, they already had paid huge charges to
finally
reach their destination, in view of
this
, the same
price
will motivate them to visit again. In conclusion, asking for more prices from tourists from different regions is not a conducive decision because they already paid huge expenses and it is the right of everyone to gain access to these buildings.

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