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Universities

should take the same

number

of men and women in each major. To what extent do you agree or disagree with

this

statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Some people argue that the

number

of students whether females or

male

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should be equal in the

universities

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admission, since

an

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ancient till now some faculties have only male students.

However

, my position is

opposite

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of

this

idea.

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essay I will look

the

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reason behind my opinion.

Firstly

, our

universities

usually

they

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don’t post how

much female

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many females

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or

male

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males

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they want per class or per year, but

some

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occasions they may mention the total

number

of students they want to take

instead

of long waiting lists. So, if

the

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all applicants who

fulfill

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the requirement

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requirement

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requirements

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of the

university

admission are all female or male they do not discriminate or prevent to sit their classes no matter what they are.

Nevertheless

some

major

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majors

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have a small

number

or even no

girls

at all, I will referee

this

into cultural and environmental issues.

For instance

, our

university

has a class which has

one

girl, and that girl was

first

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one

and

last

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one

who study that subject during my whole period of study, I was

student

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a student

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that

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university

in

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7years, and I

never

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see before or after her. The subject was Electrical Engineering and our society

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and

misjudge

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that, I was

listening

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her

one

day

in

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the television and she was talking about her struggle

for

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being an electric engineering

student

, she was a victim of the community, by the

way

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the

university

gave that

student

an opportunity which they never gave before all the males who use to study from the opening up to now, to motivate

girls

. So, I would say schools have no impact

the

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number

of

student

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students

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who will apply every

one

of them is her pupil. Despite

of

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this

argument may be right

universities

should take

a

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each parallel, and take part vital role for the encouragement of

girls

like our

university

done

it

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, and give more priority to

girls

instead

of equality, because

of

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women’s

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women

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is

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the profile of

the a

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population, if mother educated her children will benefit, and when young generation become productive the whole country will be successful.

Over

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all

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universities

have to have

same

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number

of applicants in spite of that I disagree with

this

statement,

university

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the university

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has nothing to do with who will register

her

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for her

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classes.