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Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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being Boring today's
life
 with various problems,
also
, suppressing some personality demands, increasing
drug
use
 among youth. In
this
 essay, I will mention some reasons
also
 impact of
drug
use
 from my perspective,
then
 I will give some advice and
finally
 conclude. Nowadays, because of some
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reason
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reasons
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drug
use
 is on rising. particularly, among young people. The main reason is
disappointment
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a disappointment
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 as well as unmotivated especially when they become unsuccessful in their education, job and even private
life
.they usually have an incorrect
conclusion
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conclusions
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 in their
life
. Another reason is,
they
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that they
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 prefer to have more
excited
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 in their
life
 and due to
such
 tendencies need to unnormal ways.
In addition
,
drugs
 have some bad effects on mental and physical health, In fact,
drugs
 create some diseases
such
 as blood pressure. There are some recommendations,
first
 of all, the public has to avoid from consumption any kind of bad
drugs
then
 encourage children to learn practical skills at
young
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a young
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 age or continue their education.
moreover
, the most important piece of advice is to choose a suitable friend who has care feels,
also
, tries to help you. of course, parents and society have a great share in their
life
. In conclusion, due to mentioned factors above, as far as I know, using
drugs
 do not suitable for anyone. Because have bad effects on our health and our future and
also
, limited our progress
finally
, we can with having a certain goal in
life
 and be more aware of it is dangers of
drug
use
 do prevent it.
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