You are moving home. Write a letter to your neighbors to say goodbye to them and to thank for their help during your stay. In your letter:- - explain how they helped you - say what you will miss the most about the area where you lived - invite them to visit you at your new home

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Dear all, As you all know that I am relocating to my new home

week so I am writing

this

letter to thank

you

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all of you for making my stay memorable here. Well, I vividly remember the time when I shifted in the colony, and for the

first

two weeks, I received dinner from your side. When I was ill due to cardiac issues, you all not only looked after my house for one month

last

year but

also

helped a lot with my only daughter in

studies

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her studies

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. Honestly, the memories I have had with all of you and

this

place

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will always remain as fresh as new.

Hence

, I do not want to miss the chance to arrange a

get together

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at my new home

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13 Saint John Road, New Arena avenue. I will be very happy if you accept my invitation to spend the long weekend of

this

month at my place. Can’t wait to see you all here. Best regards, Jacob Brown

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7 paragraphs

168 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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