You are moving home. Write a letter to your neighbors to say goodbye to them and to thank for their help during your stay. In your letter:- - explain how they helped you - say what you will miss the most about the area where you lived - invite them to visit you at your new home

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Dear all, As you all know that I am relocating to my new home

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week so I am writing

this

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letter to thank

you

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all of you for making my stay memorable here. Well, I vividly remember the time when I shifted in the colony, and for the

first

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two weeks, I received dinner from your side. When I was ill due to cardiac issues, you all not only looked after my house for one month

last

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year but

also

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helped a lot with my only daughter in

studies

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her studies

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. Honestly, the memories I have had with all of you and

this

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place

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will always remain as fresh as new.

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, I do not want to miss the chance to arrange a

get together

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at my new home

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13 Saint John Road, New Arena avenue. I will be very happy if you accept my invitation to spend the long weekend of

this

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month at my place. Can’t wait to see you all here. Best regards, Jacob Brown

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

168 words

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You are moving home. Write a letter to your neighbors to say goodbye to them and to thank for their help during your stay. In your letter:- - explain how they helped you - say what you will miss the most about the area where you lived - invite them to visit you at your new home

Some people think that climate change could have a negative effect on business. Other people think that climate change could create more business opportunities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should make efforts in reducing environmental pollutions and housing problems. To what extent do you agree to disagree with this statement?

In recent years, there has been an increasing trend of people from cities buying second homes in the countryside. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?