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Society is based on rules and laws. It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted to do. To what extent do you agree or not?

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There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate over the importance of the regulations to the community. Some
people
 hold a strong view that if
people
 are allowed to do whatever they want,
society
 could not work. From my perspective, I consider myself an advocate of
this
 statement. Without a shadow of a doubt, discipline plays a paramount significant role in regulating individuals’
behavior
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. Enforcing
laws
 means that place restrictions on
people
's actions, thereby helping
society
 develop in a more constructive and peaceful way.
For example
, the use and trade of narcotics are prohibited under Vietnamese law because they are addictive and can lead to unpredictable
behavior
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, including harm to others. So
laws
 are made so that everyone can obey and behave properly
However
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 if there is no rule,
society
 will suffer from the detrimental impact. When there are no
laws
 in the world, that means when
people
 are free to do whatever they desire,
society
 is being disorderly, unable to function and develop according to the will of the government. If there is no regulation prohibiting the use of firearms in Vietnam, criminals may consider utilizing firearms to carry out their crimes,
such
 as shooting at police and civilians, which would have a significant negative impact on the community.
Therefore
, there should be
laws
 everywhere in order to avoid
unfavorable
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 outcomes. In conclusion, the law brings great benefits to
a
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society
.
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