Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. Do you agree or disagree?

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Being able to attain an education is a valuable thing that a person could ever have. Going to school is not a luxury, it is
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essential and should be a privilege to each individual no matter what their household
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the person’s wealth since it will benefit both the community and the economy if it will be provided to them. The main benefit of having every person educated is that it will help lessen the poverty in the community or the whole country. For
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improve the economical
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of the bigger aspect. An example
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an educational background will most likely
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get a job because it is a company’s requirement in order for them to hire an employee. Provided that these
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will be hired from the jobs that they have applied
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will be able to generate income which can support their families. Clearly, if everyone
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educated there will be more positive results that will give convenience to the community while slowly eradicating poverty.
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, the economy will have the advantage of improving its funds and generating more income if there will be a number of companies that will invest in places where they can get possible candidates who are educated or has an educational background to be their employee. As an example, investors will take the advantage of growing and building their companies which means that there will be more jobs for
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and more taxes are paid to the government from the workers and from the companies.
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will continue to rise while giving
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a chance to be educated to get a job. In conclusion,
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of poverty and a positive growing economy. In my opinion, the government should subsidise it disregarding their household
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fundamental right
  • accessible
  • social mobility
  • personal and professional development
  • overall development
  • equality
  • social disparities
  • access
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