Some people feel that the design of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by governments. Others believe those who finance the construction of a building should be free to design it as they see fit. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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construction
and architecture
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made significant advances. There are others who ween that the authorities should control the
design
of the new
construction
project in huge cities. There are some others who reckon that the financier of the project should be set free in the aspects of
design
. In my point of view,
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believe that the government should control the
design
of the new apartments in big cities.
To begin
with, some believe that the architecture of the new buildings should be controlled by the government.
This
is because the
construction
design
of the new buildings should follow the proper laws of the
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society
socity
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society
and
environment
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.
Moreover
, it should have a proper height
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than the threshold height of the land ,drainage system and septic tank in their building.
However
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by making these in their
design
the spread of virus and
desease
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disease
are
contolled
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controlled
.
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, in a recent survey, it is shown
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deseases
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are created from the buildings constructed by breaking the law of the
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government
goverment
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government
design
in
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system.
On the other hand
, some believe that investors of the building should be set free in their
design
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construction
. Nowadays, building our own home in the
design
of our dream, is a great dream for everyone, while constructing that no one should
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control
controll
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control
that.
Furthermore
, individuals are paying tax for the land, house, and every other
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and
contrusting
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constructing
contrasting
a building in their views so no one has the
rights
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to
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control
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control
the
design
of the building.
For example
, in a recent survey, it is shown that the investors of the
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construction
constuction
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construction
filed a legal complaint
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against
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aginst
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against
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the government
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control
controll
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control
in the
design
aspects of the building. To sum up, the authorities should
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control
controll
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control
only some parts of the
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design
desing
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design
work
such
as
height
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the height
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,
drainage
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and drainage
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system of the building and the financier should set free in other parts of
design
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the design
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of
interior
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the interior
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and exterior work of the building.
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