You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter Correct the information in the article. Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information. Suggest that the magazine should do about this situation.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to inform you that, regarding the paper

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which has been published

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Sunday. There was an

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about Kandy.

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article

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, it has described

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the Kandy

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museum

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. It said the

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has been built in 1950. I must say, it is not

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correct

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because the history says it has been built in 1900. The

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most

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popular place in our town and most

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apply

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tourists

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the tourists

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are coming to observe the history of

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, your magazine provides more

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travelers

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all around the world.

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, some wrong

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will mislead the tourist.

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, I am requesting you to please publish a fresh

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about our

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with corrected

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will be the most suitable way for the correction.

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, I would

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offer a tour for the writer for better awareness

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the

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. I am looking forward

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to a

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favorable

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response Thank You Yours faithfully K.L.Nimal Perera

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

163 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Rectify
Misrepresentation
Tourism
Editor
Credibility
Accuracy
Local heritage
Fact-checking
Repercussions
Counteractive measures
Publishing ethics
Clarification
Factual error
Misconception
Authenticity

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