You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to course director at the cookery school. In your letter Describe what you enjoyed about the course. Say how much cooking you have done since the course. Suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer.

Dear Sir, I would like to give some feedback about the cookery course which has completed
last
month. The course tough perfect method of cake preparation, decoration and serving.
Further
, I had wonderful knowledge about what are the ingredients required and how to handle to necessary machines and equipment. The school facilitated teachers who are well known
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the subject.
Additionally
, I have completed 20 numbers of cake preparations.
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, I was able to sell 10 cakes. The customers’ feedbacks were delicious taste.
Moreover
, I served a cake for my mother’s birthday
also
. All over famine members appreciated my effort. The school provides a marvellous opportunity to learn accurate technical and practical knowledge
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the students.
Finally
, I could like to request you, regarding another cookery course for students. Most of them prefer to learn about how to make pastries and pizza.
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, I am looking
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a favourable response. Thank you Yours faithfully K.L.Nimal Perera
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