You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news. Write to your friend. In the letter: • Describe the house. • Describe the neighbourhood. • Invite your friend to come and see the house. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ...,

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Dear Sayi, I am elated to write to you concerning my relocation to a new apartment: The apartment is located at Number 54,along Jeta Road and it is a fully furnished flat with two en-suite bedrooms,a sitting room, a lovely kitchen and a balcony with an exquisite view of the city. The neighbourhood is quite noisy because of the buzzing sound of the city which

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makes it rowdy most times.

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, the noise does not disturb me much since I reside on the tenth floor of the building.

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, there is a green park close by where parents mostly take their children on the weekends and it is quite a scenery.

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, located nearby,about 5 minutes walk from the building is a supermarket which is my favorite feature since I enjoy cooking. Talking about cooking, I will be hosting a welcome party in two weeks and would appreciate it if you could attend.

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, I would love it if you could spend the weekend dear Sayi so that you can properly soak up the splendour of my new place

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be prepared for a tour. I really must stop here Sayi and I cannot wait to hear back from you. Warm regards, Oluwadamilola.

damilolasogbanmuFri Sep 27 2024

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Try to remove minor errors, such as misplaced punctuation marks and slight awkwardness in phrasing for a smoother read.

coherence cohesion

Use connecting devices more effectively to enhance the essay's flow, clarity, and coherence.

greeting and closing

The greeting and closing are appropriate and warm, perfectly fitting the letter's tone.

complete response

The letter covers all parts of the task and provides a complete response.

single idea per paragraph

The structure is easy to follow with well-organised paragraphs focusing on single ideas.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

205 words

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