You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news. Write to your friend. In the letter: • Describe the house. • Describe the neighbourhood. • Invite your friend to come and see the house. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ...,
Dear Sayi,
I am elated to write to you concerning my relocation to a new apartment: The apartment is located at Number 54,along Jeta Road and it is a fully furnished flat with two en-suite bedrooms,a sitting room, a lovely kitchen and a balcony with an exquisite view of the city.
The neighbourhood is quite noisy because of the buzzing sound of the city which
for instance
makes it rowdy most times. Although
, the noise does not disturb me much since I reside on the tenth floor of the building. Secondly
, there is a green park close by where parents mostly take their children on the weekends and it is quite a scenery. Also
, located nearby,about 5 minutes walk from the building is a supermarket which is my favorite feature since I enjoy cooking.
Talking about cooking, I will be hosting a welcome party in two weeks and would appreciate it if you could attend. Additionally
, I would love it if you could spend the weekend dear Sayi so that you can properly soak up the splendour of my new place therefore
be prepared for a tour.
I really must stop here Sayi and I cannot wait to hear back from you.
Warm regards,
Oluwadamilola.Submitted by damilolasogbanmu on
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