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Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Hobbies
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 play an essential role in human life because it gives them refreshment. Despite
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, people ignore their
hobbies
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 and the reason behind
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 is their busy schedule, as well as they, had become money-minded.
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, the result of ignoring the
hobbies
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 is become worst for
society
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 and individuals which I mention in a
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 piece writing. The
first
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 cause of less devoting
time
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 to
hobbies
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 is that the masses are now very busy. In brief, they have too much work and always want to complete it.
As a result
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, people can not manage their
time
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 from their work and they neglect their
hobbies
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,
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, they devoted less
time
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 to their
hobbies
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 and compromise with daily routine. The other cause is that nowadays the masses are becoming money minded. To illustrates
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 point with an example, folks earn huge money to improve their life standard; so that's why they used their
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 for extra shifts for earning enough money and
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 they forget the importance of
hobbies
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.
Consequently
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,
hobbies
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 are not fulfilled by them.
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, the effect of less
time
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 devoted to
hobbies
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 is that individuals and
society
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 will become introverted. To be more precise,
hobbies
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 help to masses to remove their stress and they feel fresh or energetic when they spent their
time
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 to does their
hobbies
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. So, if they can not manage their
time
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 and control desires
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 they not only keep away from their
hobbies
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 but
also
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 feel frustrated, which highly affected
society
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 and the social link will vanish.
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,
society
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 becomes introverted and people feel depressed too. In conclusion,
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 less
time
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 for
hobbies
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 is the major concern in today's
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, their results could not be ignorable because it affected
society
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 along with individuals and everyone should keep some
time
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 to enjoy their
hobbies
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 which feel them new energy.
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Devote time
  • Hobbies
  • Nowadays
  • Busy
  • Fast-paced
  • Lifestyles
  • Work and career
  • Technology
  • Digital entertainment
  • Limited
  • Free time
  • Lack of motivation
  • Mental wellbeing
  • Physical wellbeing
  • Decreased
  • Social interactions
  • Creativity
  • Self-expression
  • Negative effects
  • Society
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