Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Hobbies
play an essential role in human life because it gives them refreshment. Despite this
, people ignore their hobbies
and the reason behind this
is their busy schedule, as well as they, had become money-minded. However
, the result of ignoring the hobbies
is become worst for society
and individuals which I mention in a further
piece writing.
The first
cause of less devoting time
to hobbies
is that the masses are now very busy. In brief, they have too much work and always want to complete it. As a result
, people can not manage their time
from their work and they neglect their hobbies
, hence
, they devoted less time
to their hobbies
and compromise with daily routine. The other cause is that nowadays the masses are becoming money minded. To illustrates this
point with an example, folks earn huge money to improve their life standard; so that's why they used their time
for extra shifts for earning enough money and then
they forget the importance of hobbies
. Consequently
, hobbies
are not fulfilled by them.
However
, the effect of less time
devoted to hobbies
is that individuals and society
will become introverted. To be more precise, hobbies
help to masses to remove their stress and they feel fresh or energetic when they spent their time
to does their hobbies
. So, if they can not manage their time
and control desires then
they not only keep away from their hobbies
but also
feel frustrated, which highly affected society
and the social link will vanish. Thus
, society
becomes introverted and people feel depressed too.
In conclusion, although
less time
for hobbies
is the major concern in today's time
, their results could not be ignorable because it affected society
along with individuals and everyone should keep some time
to enjoy their hobbies
which feel them new energy.
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