some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is true that nowadays
people
have too many
choices
to make and it will make
people
's
lives
comfortable and
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efficient
efficiently
efficiency
effecient
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efficient
. I completely agree with
this
statement but does having so many
choices
always
makes
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our
lives
easy?
Firstly
,
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having
hjaving
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having
the opportunity to choose something according to our desire is an advantage as it makes our
lives
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interesting
intresting
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interesting
and entertaining.
For instance
, a person can choose a mode of transport. He can either travel by car, bus or even cycle to work.
Similarly
, different options are available from food to
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accommodation
accomodation
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accommodation
to technology. To exemplify, someone can choose to either live in an apartment with
the
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sea view or live in a house.
On the other hand
, having too many options to choose from makes our
lives
complicated and stressful as
people
are becoming more materialistic and
this
will ultimately create a
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throw away
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society.Throw away society is when
people
use items for a short period of time and
throws
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away
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them away
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.
For instance
, technology is getting advanced and updated day by day and there are different phones introduced.
People
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therefore
tend to buy the newest phone to
fulfill
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their desire.
Similarly
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thousand
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thousands
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of clothing items are
disposed
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due to fast
change
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changes
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in fashion.
This
will cause soil and water pollution and will face
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financial
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a finacial
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finacial
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financial
crisis. In
conclusion
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we do have too many
choices
and
i
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completely agree with it.
However
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i
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also
believe that while having
choices
makes our
lives
easy and
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convenient
convinient
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convenient
it
also
makes
it
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them
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complicated.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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