It is true that nowadays
people
have too many
choices
to make and it will make
people
's
lives
comfortable and
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efficient
efficiently
efficiency
. I completely agree with
this
statement but does having so many
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our
lives
easy?
Firstly
,
the opportunity to choose something according to our desire is an advantage as it makes our
lives
and entertaining.
For instance
, a person can choose a mode of transport. He can either travel by car, bus or even cycle to work.
Similarly
, different options are available from food to
to technology. To exemplify, someone can choose to either live in an apartment with
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sea view or live in a house.
On the other hand
, having too many options to choose from makes our
lives
complicated and stressful as
people
are becoming more materialistic and
this
will ultimately create a
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society.Throw away society is when
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.
For instance
, technology is getting advanced and updated day by day and there are different phones introduced.
People
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therefore
tend to buy the newest phone to
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their desire.
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in fashion.
This
will cause soil and water pollution and will face
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crisis.
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we do have too many
choices
and
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completely agree with it.
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also
believe that while having
choices
makes our
lives
easy and
it
also
makes
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complicated.