Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

In the contemporary epoch,

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rates are increasing day by day in many parts of the world. Most of the crimes are committed by criminals who already served their punishment. In

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behind

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and provide solutions in the forthcoming paragraphs. To commence with, the major

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behind

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situation is unemployment and poverty in

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,when any teenager commits a

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and goes to prison for that law-breaking activities, in that place they learn only bad nauseous from other offenders,

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they encourage by them and

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inspire to do the same criminal activities in their life after release from prison.

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, another

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is that lack of education

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contributes to

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in the community, Many developing nations have lower literacy rates, and due to that many offspring try to break the law at an early age.

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,

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can be resolved by taking proper steps in

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, every nation should provide free education to all the children, who left the school at an early age due to poverty, these steps will help them to improve their lifestyle in the future.

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, Authorities can pass a law, that every student has to participate in social activities and communities in

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.

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will help children to do good things for others as well as they can learn many skills by contributing to the

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, which is a good way to transform negative thoughts into positive thinking. To conclude, high

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rates are not good for the world, for

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nations should take proper steps to tackle

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problem

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and try to reduce the

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rate by offenders.

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change will help the world to build a better

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as well as a better future for the children.