It is impossible to help all people in the world, so governments should only focus on people in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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believed
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of all the citizens around the globe may not be feasible
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, leadership should keep their attention
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local population. I,
however
, strongly disagree with
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providing
provding
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providing
various aids and assistance to other
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societies
socities
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societies
not only
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a nation into global
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leadership
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leadership
but
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in maintaining regional peace and prosperity. The upcoming essay will delve
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discussing the issue and different ideas about it. To commence with, there is no iota of doubt that looking after
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own population must be the foremost priority of the government but we should
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keep in check, issues arising in the neighbouring nations. As economies are dependent on each other so there are bright chances that a problem in one nation can have effects on other.
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them with some help,
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a clean and orating image of a country.
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, during
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pandemic
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India provides vaccines to various
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countries.
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the position of India as a reliable partner and improves
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contendership
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contenders
for a
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.
Furthermore
, for nations to develop at a high pace it is important to have harmony among them and a
blissfull
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blissful
environment in the area so that trade between them flourish well and numerous problems of
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are addressed on time. When there is co-operation among different states of a continent,
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index of them remains on top.
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economies in Asia,
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the overall ranking of
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in terms
of peace is at the bottom, as countries here are envious of each other. On
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contratry
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contrary
, in Europe due to regional
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stability
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stability
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there are better living conditions. To summarise, it can be well understood that though nations have their own issues to deal with but giving a helping hand to
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eventually proves beneficial for themselves.
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