Task 2: Competitiveness is a positive quality for people in most societies. How does competitiveness affect individuals? Is it a positive or negative trend?

Across the globe, the quest for survival has been a well-acceptable characteristic amongst

individuals

in any part of the world. The majority of the people welcomed

this

aspect of human life while others kick against it. In my opinion, I feel that

this

is a remarkable occurrence.

To begin

, there are different Means we adapt to our environment in other to survive and one of these processes is the ability to compete with others. Competition has a positive outcome in that it enables

individuals

to work harder in other to fit in the society.

This

is because there are higher expectations placed on every individual in their respective areas of life and

this

brings about demand.

In addition

, competitiveness increases our creative minds and as well helps to improve innovation.

For example

, a study in 2018 among Ghanaians reveals that the majority of the citizens reported having incorporated additional skills and talents

as a result

of the need to enhance their handwork. These contributed effectively to the growth and development of their nation.

Thus

, there is a need

to

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competition.

On the other hand

, people opined that the high demand for survival is a leading cause of mental illness in various societies. They believe that

individuals

who are not progressing as expected come down with depression.

For instance

, a report has shown that over thirty per cent of mental ailments are due to an individual's struggle for survival.

Therefore

, competitiveness should be curtailed. In conclusion, despite the side effects of competition on

individuals

, I am of the view that it maintains an important aspect of human life as the society and nation at large benefit enormously from it.