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Nowadays there is an increase in people with an unhealthy diet and not doing enough physical exercises. What do you think might be the reason? What can be done to encourage people to have a healthier lifestyle?

#people #diet #exercises #reason #lifestyle
Introduction In
this
 present world, there has been
growing
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 the number of people with
harmul
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harmful
 eating habits and the numbers of hours that they are active in
physical
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the physical
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 aspect,
However
, It has been known many factors
involving
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 in
this
 process,
such
 as choosing poor nutritional foods for each meal ,in
also
 ,the sedentary job has been increasing in
this
 period of
time
. The pattern of choosing healthy meals and doing physical
activity
 is the active area to explore to
finding
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 the causes .So,I am going to consider some examples to clarify their reasons . Unhealthy diet
First
, the pace of
live
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 is
very
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 important factor to limit human options to providing a healthy meal in 24 hours,so ,
individual
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individuals
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 would prefer to have
save
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 their
time
 for progressing in their career
instead
 of wasting
in
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it
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 cooking ,so, it is clear their decision has influenced by the
restuarants
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restaurants
 that fast foods
is
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 the high popularity among their
diches
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dishes
ditches
.As result , because of the speedy
in
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living each day ,
persons
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people
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 have not enough
time
 to put the concentration on
type
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the type
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 of their foods. Exercising needs to coordinate the
invironment
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environment
 to push up
evarybody
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everybody
 to doing a high level of
activity
 ,It has been understood the majority of
carees
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careers
 are sedentary
type
 in long hours ,so , the most part of the day has been invested to doing these tasks ,even, if anybody to have a walking
time
 toward own home , It must use
metro
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the metro
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 or
other
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another type
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type
 of transportation
instead
 of cycling . To sum up ,
Healthier
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a Healthier
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lifestyle
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life style
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lifestyle
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 which has including
the
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 healthy diet and the proper level of the physical
activity
have
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has
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 been created by the pace of living
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today
todays
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today
 and the
type
 of career
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that
tthat
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that
 is more sedentary .Having the healthy
life-style
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lifestyle
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 has been constructed by the pattern of eating a
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sufficient
insufficient
fufficient
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sufficient
 nutritional food and the level of
activity
 that
these
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are diminished
this
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by the speedy life and the
type
 of jobs , so , correcting
this
 situation needs to coordinate the several sectors of society from home to work office ,in
aadition
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addition
 the government must more pay off to providing
a
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healthy
work places
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workplaces
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 and
high quality
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restuarants
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restaurants
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