Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 word

Whether sending children to

department

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a department

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for education or providing a space in their own

home

for learning is a controversial topic among individuals,

however

,each side assumes some positive points in their opinion,but ,I opine the education must do in a classroom with other

students

that each kid will be becoming a useful person in a community.So,I am going to provide some reasons in

this

area which I have experienced throughout my life.

First

,keeping kids at

home

to teach the knowledge to them has many advantages

such

as parents having more control over their performance in

do

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their tasks.

For example

,primary

students

are fond of fooling around in a classroom to prove own as an intelligent people in some way these misbehaviours may not be diagnosed at the right time by teachers in a class, because , there are many

enlistment

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at the same time to have to watch, so, stay at

home

may be a better choice to control them .

Secondly

,the most important aspect of participating in a school for learning has a more discipline for children, because they must wake up

in

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at

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a certain hour to go to the department and

handling

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handle

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some tasks in a tight moment span

such

as brushing their tooths ,eating breakfast ,wearing suitable clothes ,so,they can learn how must behave better to solving some tasks in the same occasion. There are many expenses to

send

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sending

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students

for engaging in

a

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an

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academy ,

such

as transportation expenditure ,providing different clothes in each season and

pay

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paying

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more to teachers and agents on the institute to keep our kids are secure ,

however

, public transportation, staying in a place that specified for studying have many

beneficial

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benefits

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for

students

to behave in good proper in community . To sum up , the comparison between sending children to gain knowledge in a department or at

home

leads us that the greater positive factors as been described by the schools because

this

place is good for teaching discipline , familiar with some laws in a community

such

as transportation laws and behaving as a part of our nation. I would stress in my opinion that we must send our kids to participate in

a

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an

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academy to more

expert

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experts

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in future life.