Some people says that adverting is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people thinks that advertising is so common that we no longer to pay attention to it. Discuss both sides of view and give your own opinion.
Some
people
believe that advertising is Correct your spelling
extremely
exteremly
successful at persuading us to buy things. Others think that Correct your spelling
extremely
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advertisements
advertisments
Correct your spelling
advertisements
is
so common and Correct subject-verb agreement
are
does
not steal our attention anymore. Correct subject-verb agreement
do
This
essay will explain why I agree with those who believe in Correct your spelling
advertisements
advertisments
success and discuss Correct your spelling
advertisements
further
.
Nowadays, Correct your spelling
advertisements
advertisments
are used everywhere to attract Correct your spelling
advertisements
people
toward buying things or pay for experiences such
as travel. It is published in subways
stations, streets, and inside buildings. Sometimes these Change the noun form
subway
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advertisements
advertisement
advertisments
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advertisements
does
not influence Change the verb form
do
people
because it is targeted to
everyone and not all can be Change preposition
at
thirlled
about Correct your spelling
thrilled
it
content and details. Correct pronoun usage
its
For example
, mobile applications now contain many ads
that appear all the time, but these are general and it may attract limited
amount of viewers, an ad for a game that appears Add an article
the limited
a limited
in
an old person’s phone will not bring enough attention.
Change preposition
on
However
, using advertising methods Correct your spelling
effectively
effictively
can be successful by publishing it where the targeted consumers are located. In Correct your spelling
effectively
this
way
more Add a comma
,way
people
will be seeing the ads
which it
Correct pronoun usage
whose
content
may Replace the word
contains
interests
them. Change the verb form
interest
For example
, publishing ads
about groceries on
the entrance of a supermarket will make those who see it excitedChange preposition
at
,
and bring the targeted Remove the comma
apply
costumers
to enter the shop. Correct your spelling
customers
Moreover
, advertising through internet
is more popular and efficient than ever, where you can find groups of interest and advertise using Correct article usage
the internet
the
social media. Correct article usage
apply
Furthermore
, Internet technology provided many techniques for companies and made marketing easier, where consumers can be reached through emails.
In conclusion, although
the wide Correct your spelling
distribution
distibution
of Correct your spelling
distribution
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advertisements
advertisments
sometimes does not give positive results in terms of influencing the Correct your spelling
advertisements
buyers
appetite. Change to a genitive case
buyer's
buyers'
However
, targeted ads
and planned marketing is
always showing successful results.Change the verb form
are
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