Some think that politicians should always be honest while others feel that there are times when they must lie. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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play a very vital role in any

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efficient or bad

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they can create complete chaos. There are

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they should be always honest and some

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support that they should lie if it is necessary, I support

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power. But after

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some

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think they should be honest about their policies.

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reasons, in general

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like politics with lies, but we are not live in

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they have to tell a lie to

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they will

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panic, and unnecessary buy and stock grossers create chaos. In my opinion,

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should be

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honest, they should stick to their words, but

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they can lie for the good cause. To conclude, many

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, but there are some unavoidable

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occur, when they have to lie, to maintain balance

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and prevent

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from panicking.

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

integrity
transparency
ethical dilemma
diplomatic tact
misinformation
public trust
social fabric
national security
pragmatic politics
democratic principles
accountability
role models
grey area
public perception
preventive secrecy

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Some think that politicians should always be honest while others feel that there are times when they must lie. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

In some parts of the world tradition festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. What problem is this causing and what measures could be taken to counter this situation?

Being a celebrity-such as a famous film star and sport personality-brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?