Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays, the number of people who works online is increasing from year to year, and it has

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on student's learning process as well since studying at home is becoming popular. I believe that

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is a negative development.

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essay will discuss why online schooling is not the best option. Distance learning leads to a low level of

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. If students study from home it is really hard for teachers to control them and, on top of that, tutors are able to understand whether a student assimilates information or not from their emotions.

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, the statistic showed that pupils who studied online during a pandemic passed dreadfully the exam which is necessary to enter university.

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affirms the importance of a traditional method of studying. Except for decreasing knowledge, online learning does not provide students with the opportunity to develop communication skills. As children study on their own at home, there is no chance to make talk with others especially when school is the best place for children to develop their soft skills.

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, 7 out of 10 students who were interviewed in the 75th school in Astana said that after covid-19 it was difficult for them to talk with other people, and the vast majority felt a bit shy and uncomfortable. Distance

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restricts children's ability to speak with other people. To sum up, even though more and more schools are switching to the online type of

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, factors

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as lack of communication and poor quality

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display the profound role of the traditional method.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 5.5

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Fully explain your ideas

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