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Some people say its lot to tell about a person’s culture and character from their clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #person’s #culture #character #clothes
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Everyone loves to
dress
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 different from others, but maybe some
people
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 or not. Sometimes you can tell a person's homeland or personality from their
clothes
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. But sometimes it is hard to tell.
This
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about
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can
people
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 say other person's
culture
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 and character from their
clothes
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. In the 21st century, everyone allows
to wear
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 anything in public
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 as fancy dresses, vintage
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, traditional customs or even they can wear bikinis in the crowd. So can we tell about
people
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's character from their wardrobe? The answer is we can.
People
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 usually
dress
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 like their personality.
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, kind and sensitive
people
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 tend to wear comfy and soft style
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such
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 as for girls bright or neutral- coloured
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.
People
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 who often wear formal
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, particularly suits, blazers or
dress
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 shirts are usually hard-working and responsible.
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, you can tell
people
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's hobbies from what they wear. Punks and Gothics always wear black and unique
clothes
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.
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, maybe you can tell
people
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's personalities from their clothing. But it is hard to tell
people
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's
culture
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 from their
clothes
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.
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, some
people
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 wear their traditional
clothes
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 a lot of time, but the rest of them
dress
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 normal
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 as wearing jeans or t-shirts. We cannot tell
people
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's race or
culture
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 from their clothing styles. In conclusion, I believe we point out a few personalities from a person's
clothes
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. But we cannot know about their true character until we talk to them. Nowadays
people
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 care so much about fashion and styles.
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, it is hard to tell
people
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's
culture
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, traditions and detailed personalities from their styles.
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