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Some people say that Ebooks and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines.tp what extent do you agree or disagree

#people #ebooks #technology #newspaper #magazines #tp
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Over the period of time, the latest
technology
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 is being used in almost all industries to make their processes easy and cheap. Few
people
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 believe that digital books and modern
technology
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 will vanish the
use
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 of print media and
magazines
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. I agree that
Ebooks
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 will replace the traditional
newspapers
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 and
magazines
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. There is a big impact of digital
technology
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 like the internet and smartphones in our day-to-day life. So, it is really easy to get any of the latest news or
magazines
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 on our smartphone from any part of the world with the help of the internet, whereas,
newspapers
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 or journals may not be available everywhere. Sometimes, it is possible to get regional
newspapers
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 or
magazines
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 that may not be available everywhere.
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, immigrants who live in other parts of the world can read
newspapers
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 in their regional language.
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, digital media has its nature of advantages as well. The
use
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 of
Ebooks
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 will reduce the number of trees being cut to produce papers for
magazines
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 and
newspapers
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.
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 to that, modern
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 enables fast access to any of the articles in one click.
People
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 can read any of the articles or news anytime with the help of the internet.
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, over-usage of any digital
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 is harmful to health. The digital screen is required to
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 any of the
Ebooks
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, it harms our eyes. Sometimes by looking at a screen constantly,
people
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 feel uncomfortable,
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 many
people
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 avoid or reduce the
use
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 of
this
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 kind of media. In conclusion, as every latest thing has its own advantages and disadvantages,
ebooks
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 and modern
technology
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 have
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. It will reduce the
use
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 of paper, but not completely as in my view.
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