The NRA believe more guns make the country safer. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

It is often argued that more

weapons

make the

country

safer. I strongly disagree with

this

statement and think that

guns

make the

country

more dangerous.

First

of all, I reckon that the impact of

guns

is huge, school shootings and terror acts happen in the countries

such

as

USA

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very often because the

weapons

can be purchased by 18 years old individuals.

This

could be prevented by the government,

nonetheless

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constitution of the US allows people to buy

weapons

.

Moreover

,

guns

and knives are available almost in every town in the United States of America.

For instance

, the situation in a recent primary school shooting that has happened in Texas, 20 people have been killed by

18-year-old

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an 18-year-old

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individual

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with mental and psychopathic problems,

hence

18 children under the age of 14 were killed. That’s why it is very dangerous and silly to think that

guns

make the

country

safer.

Secondly

, an excess of

weapons

may provide opportunities for felons and criminals to buy

a big and cheap amounts

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a big and cheap amount

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of

arsenal

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the arsenal

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.

In other words

, they will be armoured like police or army which may cause big trouble and consequences for society.

Subsequently

, the

country

by trying to save itself, make an opportunity to destroy itself.

For example

, the situation that happened in January in Kazakhstan demonstrated that felons and terrorists can cause big trouble to the government by stealing

guns

from gunshops and weapon markets.

Thus

, even if governments around the world will produce

weapons

, they need to be in the usage of the regular army or police not in people’s use. To sum up, I strongly believe that more

guns

make the

country

not a safe place,

in

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it provides with

weapons

felons and terrorists and because of

this

school shootings and terrors happen in the world.