Some believe that nuclear weapons benefit the world at large. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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4 paragraphs

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Some believe that nuclear weapons benefit the world at large. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Your opinion

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