Some believe that nuclear weapons benefit the world at large. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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an inevitable topic . I vehemently accord with the given statement . In
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, I will expound my accordance along with credible examples . The chief rationalization for my agreement comes from heterogeneous points.
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in nuclear
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social media . Is there any other reason behind my agreeing ? ,
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there are . Switch , they are using nuclear
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time we can not use
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weapons
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and it is really dangerously . To summarize the compositions , the essay explicated my accordance with nuclear
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weapons
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also
shed light on reasons of it ,
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