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You are planning to go and study English at a school overseas. You would like some information about their courses. Write a letter to the school. In your letter Ask about the school Say what kind of accommodation you want Mention any special request you have (for example diet)

#study #english #school #information #courses #accommodation #request #diet
Dear Sir/Madam, I am planning to get admission
in
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 your
school
 in the
english
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English
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 course. I am writing to get information regarding
school
 facilities
that
is
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as
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 literature and residence as well as special diet plans. The
first
 thing
i
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 would like to know about
school
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the school
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 location. Could you please give me
current
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 address of
school
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the school
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?
Moreover
,
i
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I
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 would like to know about
library
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the library
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 of
school
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the school
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that
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and
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 how
i
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I
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 can get membership
of
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 it as
i
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 have to read
english
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English
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 literature books to complete my study. It might be useful if you could provide me
information
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with information
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 regarding
residence
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the residence
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 hostel . I am looking for sharing
room
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a room
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 with an Indian community student.
Furthermore
,
is
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are
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 there any sports
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facilities
facilties
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facilities
are
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available in
hostel
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a hostel
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 because
i
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I
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 would like to play soccer in
evening
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the evening
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 time to relax my mind. I would be thankful if you could give me details about
diet
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the diet
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 plan of
hostel
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the hostel
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 mess since
i
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I
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 have
allergy
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an allergy
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from
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to
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 wheat flour so
i
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I
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 cannot eat bread
make
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 from flour.
In addition
, it would be great if
i
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apply
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you could give
vegetarian
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a vegetarian
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 meal. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully,
Komaljeet
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Kamaljeet
 Singh
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